Do you like light punishment or heavy punishment? Of course you will like the light punishment. However, most of parents don't think light punishment can make students better than before. Yeah, most of students don't listen parents' lesson, but a few of students hear parents' lesson by light punishment. Not only heavy punishment gives students a lesson. Also, the heavy punishment has side affect. That punishment can make students worse and worse. Today, I will show you a movie about punishment. The name of movie is ' Spring summer fall winter and spring. ' There are 4 lessons and I want to talk about punishment, in Spring. First, see this movie.
Did you see this movie? I think it would be long, but it is very impressive. I think the most impressive part was Spring part, so I am going to tell you about only spring part. The moral lesson in spring part is about punishment. There are two people in spring part, adult and little guy. They believe Buddhism, and Buddhism is religion which insists not to kill living things. However, the little guy, who believe Buddhism, put the rocks in three animals, fish, frog, and snake. Even normal people don't do that thing except few people. Then, we have to make disappeared that bad mind which is located in little guy's mind, but how? How can we cure that bad mind to good mind? Hit him? Make him to cry? I don't think those ways are good way. The best way is to advice little guy. We have to make him to notice his fault by himself. Then, he will not do that fault again. However, think that the adult gave him heavy punishments. Then, he will not know his fault and do that fault again. We should prevent that his fault happens again and again, so it is the best way to do an advice. I insist that only heavy punishment brings good result, but the light punishment can bring good result and heavy punishment can bring bad result for us.
I want to ask your opinion, do you think heavy punishment such as hitting or punching is better than light punishment like advice? I think not. Light punishment can bring good moods for both parents and children! Then, what about heavy punishment? Do you think that can get good result for children and parents? No, it isn't. It can bring good result for only one, mostly to the parents, so I prefer light punishment. This is the end of my reflective essay, and I think your mind changes because of these paragraphs.
You are off to an excellent start! I like how you introduce the video before writing about it. Remember, the most important paragraph is where you share your own personal experience. And then conclude it by linking your experience to the video, where you give YOUR opinion about the best way to teach children.
답글삭제Any children don't like punishment. So maybe it is better that you change the word ‘like’ to ‘choice’.As is mentioned above, you show your experience for punishment. Have a good day!
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