2012년 8월 2일 목요일

Argument Essay - Joseph Kony

  If someone kidnaps you when you are sleeping in your bed, how would you feel? You will not know that someone is kidnapping you, however, if you have woken up and noticed that someone is kidnapping you, you will be so surprised to be kidnapped by someone that you don't know. You will know that you are kidnapped, if kidnapper is wearing a dark mask or something what you think the perpetrator always wear. You came out from bed carefully, but there are soldiers everywhere. You have to run for your life. However, you can't run away because of the soldiers. What will you do then? This situation happened in Uganda.
  Do you want to be kidnapped? Do you want to be injured? Of course not. However, it happened recently, in April. We call it, Kony 2012. Today, I am going to tell you about that issue, especially about the unwanted dictator, Joseph Kony.
  Joseph Kony L.R.A. in Uganda (Lord's Resistance Army), called as the leader of an armed rebel forces, currently being arranged in the International Criminal Court as an international range. Connie Joseph, during the last nine years, kidnapped more than 30,000 children in Uganda and gave guns to kill their parents, and sold girls sold for sexual slavery, If you do not cooperate, you are executed. Also, Joseph Kony as a leader of the Ugandan rebels of God, is a criminal who is currently wanted by Interpol. 20 years targeting children in Uganda, rape, assault, murder, and atrocities still continue. The International Criminal Court (ICC) in the No. 1 ranking by worst range name was raised, the current worldwide interest and support getting hot 'KONY 2012' is also the target of the campaign.
  Then, what can we do to save children in Uganda? There are two ways to solve that problem. First, we can send money to them. If we send money, they would buy some food and escape to farther place. Then, they can save their lives. They could keep their futures. Second, we can make Kony famous.If Kony becomes famous, we can protect children's die because of Kony. Then, how can we do to make Kony famous? We can share 'Kony 2012' video in Facebook or blogs. I will show you the video, 'Kony 2012'.




Did you like this video? Isn't the children who don't have anything wrong are poor? To save these children, we have to make Joseph Kony famous and aid the children with a lot of moneys. Then, Joseph Kony will stop bad things. Now, I will give you an image.



  'MORE POWERFUL THAN AN IDEA WHO'S TIME IS NOW'
  You have to remember this sentence. Also, you have to memorize April 20, which is a day that a lot of children died by Kony. Let's log on in Facebook, and share the videos, images, and a lot of things which is related with Kony. Why? It is the way to make Joseph Kony more famous than now. Then, the peace, which everybody want, will be come for us. Kony 2012, which was the best issue in 2012, has to be memorized by everyone in the Earth with a wish that Kony will stop the bad things which is kidnapping children, killing and hurting children, or destroying the houses where children live. In conclusion, I want to say only one sentence, 'Joseph Kony has to stop doing crimes, killing children.'






댓글 2개:

  1. Looks like the essay ended abruptly. From the essay written till now, I enjoyed your introduction very much. It allows the readers to sympathize with the kidnapped children, feeling how it would be when we are being kidnapped by unknown soldiers. You could perhaps write more about what we could do to save those children. Good job!

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  2. Good to see the links in there, and even though it isn't finished, we will fix it up and add a picture and video for a complete post. Come and see me for the edited stuff on paper.

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